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Under the subheading of "manpower" there is an example given related to "hostile fire" ***(changed to operator injury)***. This is obviously a military example. Is it possible to think of an example which would be applicable across domains?
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This article is at the lowest level of maturity of any of the articles that I have reviewed so far. The article lists a number of dimensions of interest in relation to the human systems integration issue and describes them reasonably and is simply. However the article does not provide any references at all ***added two additional readings but agree with observation****, meaning that a reader would be able to neither find further information to better understand the nature of the issues nor be able to have any guidance to understand the systems engineering responses to the issues.
 
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The tone of the article as far as it goes is appropriate.
 
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With the caveat of the long paragraph above, which should result in some significant review comments I would regard this article as at a low level of maturity but appropriate to send into the review. The main reason that I would send it to review is to show to reviewers what is essentially a stub that for the whole article so that reviewers would be aware that this matter is included in SEBOK.
 
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I presume that the reason for the status being as it is follows from changes in the part structure of the SEBOK relatively recently.
 

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