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Description:  Section is descriptive
 
 
 
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Writing: with one minor suggestion, OK
 
 
 
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Opening sentence should be "world economies" (plural); "manufacturing economies" (plural); and "service economies" (plural).  ***Fixed
 
 
 
I wonder about the validity of "Electronic-Oriented" under "Unique Characteristics of Service Systems".  Just a question for the author here -- aren't there service systems without an electronic orientation?  Is my local laundromat a service system?  Is it electronically oriented?  (I recognize that the author is not called upon to assert his own views, but to review the state of knowledge -- I just raise this as a minor question.) ***this is quoted material and so the quote was made more obvious.
 

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