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| − | Writing: with one minor suggestion, OK
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| − | Citations: OK
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| − | Cross-Linkages: OK
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| − | Maturity: Good -- one suggested grammar change, below.
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| − | Opening sentence should be "world economies" (plural); "manufacturing economies" (plural); and "service economies" (plural). ***Fixed
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| − | I wonder about the validity of "Electronic-Oriented" under "Unique Characteristics of Service Systems". Just a question for the author here -- aren't there service systems without an electronic orientation? Is my local laundromat a service system? Is it electronically oriented? (I recognize that the author is not called upon to assert his own views, but to review the state of knowledge -- I just raise this as a minor question.) ***this is quoted material and so the quote was made more obvious.
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